雅思寫作常見的語(yǔ)病分析

在雅思寫作考試中紅，希望寫出一篇不錯(cuò)的文章，合理運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法是非常重要的手段，但是語(yǔ)法不扎實(shí)的話，寫出來的句子大都是病句。那么，小編整理了雅思寫作常見的語(yǔ)病分析，希望可以幫助到大家。

1.雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句

eg. For those under 26， there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型屬于雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句高發(fā)句型，因?yàn)榫渲械腷e動(dòng)詞已經(jīng)是謂語(yǔ)，而句子后面的動(dòng)詞通常是定語(yǔ)從句中的成分，故不能作為主句中的謂語(yǔ)。例句中同時(shí)出現(xiàn)了“were”和“study”，根據(jù)上面的分析，were應(yīng)該是謂語(yǔ)，而study for career應(yīng)該是定語(yǔ)從句，因此，例句應(yīng)修正改成：

For those under 26， there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26， there were 80% students studying for career.

2.句子不完整

eg. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語(yǔ)是the most popular kind of transport，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(系動(dòng)詞)是was， 而by road按照語(yǔ)法應(yīng)該是方式狀語(yǔ)，此句缺乏表語(yǔ)。應(yīng)改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

3.主系表結(jié)構(gòu)使用錯(cuò)誤

eg. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：we are impossible“我們是不可能”，表意不對(duì)。這種表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)中對(duì)應(yīng)的句型是：It is…for…to…， 所以應(yīng)該改成：

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

4.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后的動(dòng)詞原形和動(dòng)名詞的使用出錯(cuò)

eg.Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

這種錯(cuò)誤可能是筆誤，在雅思作文中偶爾出現(xiàn)不至于扣分，但是通篇都是這樣的錯(cuò)誤，那么肯定是有影響的。

“花更多時(shí)間在電腦上”這個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作為主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該要用動(dòng)名詞形式：

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

5.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)用錯(cuò)

eg. As far as I am concerned， people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

Because引導(dǎo)的句子做原因狀語(yǔ)從句，既然是從句，那么前面就不應(yīng)該使用句號(hào)使其獨(dú)立成句，而應(yīng)該改成逗號(hào)，because首字母小寫。

6.詞性使用錯(cuò)誤

eg. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介詞，而這里構(gòu)成to do(不定式)，只能用動(dòng)詞。因此，可改為：

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

7.從句的誤用和濫用

eg. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語(yǔ)，固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句連用，氣勢(shì)磅礴，這就是所謂的高分句型。

eg. In this essay， I will discuss what those， who are two kinds of people in this topic， are how to think and how to choose. 實(shí)再迂回婉轉(zhuǎn)，不知所云。